Tuesday, 21 March 2017

mt bruce

   Mt Bruce

Yay finally we are on the way to mt bruce and I couldn't wait to see the birds.Good we are finally here and same children from rim hab and room 8.now we got morning tey and launch because we wore driving for a long time.I saw a kaka and a takha.There is cicadas erve were so it sands like the wild and the birds won't fly away.Then mr blake and Ollie with nils mum went to feed the eels and they had sharp teth.Mr blake was restling a eel and Ollie's mum kiss a eel.Then we watch three short moves.Then we went to the with kiwi and the brane kiwi with white fithers. It was fun.

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15 comments:

  1. it is so cool and I love it

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  2. really good detail alyssa i really want to see some more detail in your awesome story

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  3. i like your detail Alyssa it is very cool your story is awesome

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  4. good work Alyssa Mt Bruce sounds so cool I wish I was there.
    Amie [:

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  5. I love it. has heaps of detail. good work

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  6. I like your detail and your story

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    1. THANKS charlie I love you as my.......frend

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  7. hi alyssa i love your woke it is very cool love riah be happy

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  8. thats really awsome alyssa

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  9. great work it sounds like it was fun

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  10. well done but please put more :)

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  11. wow alyssa well done but put more please on to it like millie side

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