Mt Bruce
Yay finally we are on the way to mt bruce and I couldn't wait to see the birds.Good we are finally here and same children from rim hab and room 8.now we got morning tey and launch because we wore driving for a long time.I saw a kaka and a takha.There is cicadas erve were so it sands like the wild and the birds won't fly away.Then mr blake and Ollie with nils mum went to feed the eels and they had sharp teth.Mr blake was restling a eel and Ollie's mum kiss a eel.Then we watch three short moves.Then we went to the with kiwi and the brane kiwi with white fithers. It was fun.
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it is so cool and I love it
ReplyDeletereally good detail alyssa i really want to see some more detail in your awesome story
ReplyDeletei like your detail Alyssa it is very cool your story is awesome
ReplyDeletethank you Ella
Deletegood work Alyssa Mt Bruce sounds so cool I wish I was there.
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thanks Amie :) ;):):)
DeleteI love it. has heaps of detail. good work
ReplyDeleteI like your detail and your story
ReplyDeleteTHANKS charlie I love you as my.......frend
Deletehi alyssa i love your woke it is very cool love riah be happy
ReplyDeletethats really awsome alyssa
ReplyDeletegreat work it sounds like it was fun
ReplyDeletewell done but please put more :)
ReplyDeleteoh that's so cool
ReplyDeletewow alyssa well done but put more please on to it like millie side
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